Frogs

Paragraph 1-introduction the setting what it looks like  the weather

 One blistering hot day Jackson was walking to a  car dump. When he stood there He thought he would not get anywhere around the big island filled with cars. He saw a trolley with rusty wheels that was squeaking loudly. The weather was dry,polluted,gloomy.

Paragraph 2-introduction the main character character  what he’s wearing

Jackson was wearing a big suit with cooling machines inside so he couldn’t get hot. He brought protective goggles so the pollution didn’t get in his eyes and he brought his radiation detector for the radiation.

Paragraph 3 building up-hands into the junkyard

,smell,see, hear.

As he walked in he saw a shopping cart,oil drums,boats, and heaps of cars. He started to look in the cars and around the yard for some treasure for him to sell. He smelt oil,gas and toxic. 

Paragraph 4 Building up -finding valuable goods to sell when Jackson walked down the next row he saw a truck he ran over and found a tool box in good condition for him to sell. Jackson found this car with a sat-nav in a glove box. As he walked down some more rows he heard a splash he ran where he heard it when he looked he saw 5  frogs swimming in a little pool of water he took one and ran back because he was running out of air.

Paragraph 5 building up

 When Jackson got to the entrance the peace of wood was not there? Then he turned around and he didn’t have enough time to run away so he got beaten up and tied to the bonnet of a car. The frog fell out and hopped back to his little pool of water. Jackson managed to get out of the rope and put the wood over to the other side he ran back home.    

Conclusion

Jackson set out on a mission to find things to sell. He found a yard full of things including some frogs. Unfortunately the yard belonged to someone else and they found him.  He got beaten up and tied on a bonnet of a car and they took his things.