Tuesday, 11 August 2020

how do banks work

 introduction

Banks were made a thousand years ago and they keep your money safe in vaults. It's bigger than a piggy bank because the banks vaults have to be gigantic because they have to store thousands and thousands of dollars in their vaults. 


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If you start earning money you should open a bank account and deposit the money into the bank. The bank uses the money and lends it to other people. After a year they will have to pay it back to the bank. They will make a payment to you for letting them use your money. If you have put your money into a savings account you might get more interest than if you put it into an everyday account. 


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When the bank gives the money to someone else they have to pay a fee, in other words they borrow money from the bank but they don’t get it for free, this could be like a loan or a mortgage. But when they’re finished with the money, they have to pay the full amount that they had borrowed from the people that had given some money to the bank.


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Banks use a process where they borrow, lend and earn interest so that people across the country can use the money that you lend to the bank and then the bank gives it to the people who want to borrow the money.  


Conclusion

Banks provide safe places for people to keep their money.  They can also help you to earn money on your savings or help you out when you need to borrow money.


Frogs


Paragraph 1-introduction the setting what it looks like  the weather


 One blistering hot day Jackson was walking to a  car dump. When he stood there He thought he would not get anywhere around the big island filled with cars. He saw a trolley with rusty wheels that was squeaking loudly. The weather was dry,polluted,gloomy.


Paragraph 2-introduction the main character character  what he’s wearing


Jackson was wearing a big suit with cooling machines inside so he couldn’t get hot. He brought protective goggles so the pollution didn’t get in his eyes and he brought his radiation detector for the radiation.


Paragraph 3 building up-hands into the junkyard

,smell,see, hear.


As he walked in he saw a shopping cart,oil drums,boats, and heaps of cars. He started to look in the cars and around the yard for some treasure for him to sell. He smelt oil,gas and toxic. 


Paragraph 4 Building up -finding valuable goods to sell when Jackson walked down the next row he saw a truck he ran over and found a tool box in good condition for him to sell. Jackson found this car with a sat-nav in a glove box. As he walked down some more rows he heard a splash he ran where he heard it when he looked he saw 5  frogs swimming in a little pool of water he took one and ran back because he was running out of air.


Paragraph 5 building up

 When Jackson got to the entrance the peace of wood was not there? Then he turned around and he didn’t have enough time to run away so he got beaten up and tied to the bonnet of a car. The frog fell out and hopped back to his little pool of water. Jackson managed to get out of the rope and put the wood over to the other side he ran back home.    


Conclusion

Jackson set out on a mission to find things to sell. He found a yard full of things including some frogs. Unfortunately the yard belonged to someone else and they found him.  He got beaten up and tied on a bonnet of a car and they took his things.


Thursday, 23 July 2020

my descriptive writing

Kobe said to Nathan ”do you want to trade anything with the two goldfish?''
 Nathan said like what “Kobe said my clown,transformer or my dad Nathan said yes i’ll trade you the two goldfish for your dad so Nathan took Kobe's dad and Kobe took Nathan's goldfish and went upstairs to put the two goldfish in his room.


Kobe’s mum came home and went up to Kobe's room. Mum kobe said do you like my goldfish? Can we go get some fish food said kobe. When we came back from getting the fish food my Mum yelled where is your dad and sister? I don’t know, said Kobe. Mum found my sister but not dad. My sister told my mum everything that happened.

Me and my sister had to go find our dad. It took a long time for us to find him. When we found him He was still reading his newspaper so he hopped out of the cage and we worked back home. We dropped dad off and me and my sister went to Nathan's house and gave Nathan the goldfish and went back home. I promised that I’ll never do it again but she didn’t say anything about my sister.

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